We don't like the current design. It doesn't look very sophisticated. Definitely feels like 2nd rate design from a visual perspective.
From a layout perspective, there are tons of problems, especially with page breaks and such being in bad places.
From a technical perspective, it is very hard to read on a phone and the charts look really confusing in the way they're laid out. We really do want this to look good on a phone as well as a desktop computer. Many of our clients will be reading workouts and information on their phone at the gym.
I have included the entire ebook as currently is for your reference!
Again though, PAGE 18-20 IS WHAT WE ARE SHOOTING FOR IN THIS CONTEST!
You don't have to keep the design to the original 3 pages. We want you to be free to do whatever you like to make it look beautiful!
Additionally, I've attached two other documents:
1. Branding guide: This is all our fonts, colors, etc!
2. Kayla Itsines HELP: This is one of our competitor's products for your reference.